Two Lives

Two Lives

A Poem by Adam Crate

© 2013 Adam Crate


Author's Note

Adam Crate
I've been busy working on a few different projects but I wanted to share something on here. This is an older poem that I wrote a few months ago for my girlfriend. The inspiration came because we are dating long-distance and it takes a lot of patience to make everything work.

I hope you enjoyed reading it!

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Based on the premise we all have a soulmate....so romantic! Long distance relationships need a lot of tender loving care to work, but they can and do. Very lovely write and the presentation was great. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


Adam Crate

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the presentation.
Very simple, short, yet outstandingly deep. I love the message that love requires a lot of patience. Wonderful work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Adam Crate

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the positive review. I'm definitely learning that patience is a key part of love ^^
Nicely and well explained. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Adam Crate

6 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Simplicity in the lines...yet the longing relationship is hard to do...and this gives a testament to the factors in which you have to go through to be with her in the lines...I see you even went out of the way to make this presentation with the frame around the verse...Good lucky with your other projects also as quoted on your Author's note...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Adam Crate

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I'm happy you noticed the frame; I made that myself, and it matches the color.. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

6 Years Ago

You're welcome...my book comes out next month: The Onyx ~ Vena Amoris

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Added on October 27, 2013
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Adam Crate
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I apply my words like an artist applies art to a canvas. I'm currently 22 years old and in the process of exploring the world, one place at a time. You can find more of my writing here: http://theg.. more..

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