Two Lives

Author's Note

I've been busy working on a few different projects but I wanted to share something on here. This is an older poem that I wrote a few months ago for my girlfriend. The inspiration came because we are dating long-distance and it takes a lot of patience to make everything work.

I hope you enjoyed reading it!

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Based on the premise we all have a soulmate....so romantic! Long distance relationships need a lot of tender loving care to work, but they can and do. Very lovely write and the presentation was great. Lydi**

[Adam Crate]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the presentation.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Very simple, short, yet outstandingly deep. I love the message that love requires a lot of patience. Wonderful work!

[Adam Crate]

Thanks for the positive review. I'm definitely learning that patience is a key part of love ^^

[burnhouse]

Nicely and well explained. :)

[Adam Crate]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Simplicity in the lines...yet the longing relationship is hard to do...and this gives a testament to the factors in which you have to go through to be with her in the lines...I see you even went out of the way to make this presentation with the frame around the verse...Good lucky with your other projects also as quoted on your Author's note...

[Adam Crate]

Thanks for the review. I'm happy you noticed the frame; I made that myself, and it matches the colors of my girlfriend and I: red and blue, fire and ice. Thanks for the good luck, too. Good luck on your own projects!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...my book comes out next month: The Onyx ~ Vena Amoris