Following Your Heart

Following Your Heart

A Poem by CraziiDeerz
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I was inspired to write this poem after I was asked one day, 'Who do you like?' i really didn't have an answer...ah well, hope you like it!!!

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Make up your mind.
You need to get things straight.
Do you like him?
Your brain says no.
Your heart says yes.
You hate him?
But why?
Maybe it's because he's been taken away,
Maybe it's because you can't get your arms around him,
Just like his girlfriend did.
You know it's true.
No more excuses.
Admit it.
Stop denying yourself.
You like him.
A lot.
Follow your dreams.
Follow your heart.
What are you waiting for?
Make up your mind.
Get things straight.
Do you like him?
Your brain says no.
Your heart says yes.
Stop fooling yourself.
Go out there and get him.
Follow your heart.

© 2011 CraziiDeerz


Author's Note

CraziiDeerz
Thanks to anyone who reads!!! I really hope that you all like it!!!

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Really??? Is that what I should do to? This is exactly what's going on in my mind an heart an all that stuff. This was awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hard to decide when heart and mind on different roads. I like the way you described the battle to go forward or do nothing. Last line can be dangerous. Old heart can trick you. Always know what you are getting yourself into. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! I can relate to this so much it's almost scary. :) Thanks for writing something that so perfectly states how I feel. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


such a emotional piece, well presented

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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CraziiDeerz
CraziiDeerz

Aurora, IL



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