The Other World

The Other World

A Poem by CraziiDeerz
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When I lay outside on those rare perfect and sunny days, I feel as though I'm drifting off into some other dimension, only to be interrupted by the disruptiveness of reality...

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Finally
Time to myself
I lay on the cool grass
In the pitch black darkness
With nothing but the silent breeze
To keep me down here on Earth
I enter a whole new world
One where the spirits talk to me
Oh so subtly
But surely
A world where there are no problems
No worries
No troubles
Just peace
Why can't I stay here?
Reality is pain
Reality is hard
Reality is hell
This new world calls to me
I can only just barely hear it
But the sounds of reality overcome me
They fill my ears
Drawing me away from the peace
No, don't take me back!
Oh how I wished to stay in that world
But my time has not yet come
Reality is much too strong
When will it end?

© 2011 CraziiDeerz


Author's Note

CraziiDeerz
To anyone who reads, thank you very much!!! I appreciate every single view greatly!!! Hope everybody likes this one!!!

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Reality is pain
Reality is hard
Reality is hell

love this part, this is amazing

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Added on May 30, 2011
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CraziiDeerz
CraziiDeerz

Aurora, IL



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