The one for me

The one for me

A Poem by Crazo14

The one who tells me im there all
And that we are always happy together
Never dreading to see each other
Can talk to each other for hours
Holding hands and never wanna let go
Staying together through all the bumps and hurdles we come across
Making each other laugh over mistakes we made
Doesn't matter if we're perfect or not
Matters is that we're there for each other
Caring for each other like no tomorrow
Telling each other and never getting tired of hearing the words
Saying the dumbest things and the weird moments
But I promise she is the one for me

© 2011 Crazo14


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your such an amzing poet, to tell you the truth you just might be better than shakespeares!! i have probally read every poem you wrote on this website...and when i read them i feel such a powerful presence in them :) but my favorite poem from you is this one becuase its just sooo beautiful and just soo perfect... just like you!!! i know i have a realationship like this ;) and i know both of us love eachother sooo much!! ... our realationship is just like this poem maybe even better ;)
Tu etes mon coeur

Posted 9 Years Ago


This ia exactly what I hope to have some day. Beautiful:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a sweet poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


@CobyCoyle He means "the one who tells me {that} I'm their all"

its a sweet poem and it outlines what we all need from a relationship. i like it, and im glad you wrote it. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


The one who tells me im there all
This line didn't make much sense to me, I paused and tried to make sense of it and couldn't.
Very cute poem though

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely...Your emotions were really present here... :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


let's see if you get it now :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ahh, the feeling of love. This really captures the feelings you share for her through the simple things that bring you two closer together.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 16, 2011
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Crazo14
Crazo14

Erwin, TN



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I write pretty much any kind of poem. From my experiences to some short stories. So befriend me and no regrets just some good friendships and more more..

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