Warrior

Warrior

A Poem by Crazo14

He has a heart of a lion
Eyes of the tiger
Quickness of a wolf
Never quitting when the times get rough
Pulling through all the things that try to drag me down
Don't let anyone tell him whats he going to do
Shows everyone wrong when he does the impossible
Supports all military
No one can take him down
Excepts all challenges 
Steps up to the chained beast the drag him down
And now stronger than him and his slaved demons

© 2011 Crazo14


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Another amazing writing!
I truly love the beginning

Posted 9 Years Ago


loved the imagery in the beginning. at first I took 'warrior' as a symbolic representation of a strong spirited individual, in life. but then i got to the line 'supports all military', which kinda gave me a hint lol. i don't support war, but i liked the powerful description and meaning. favourite line, or the one that drew me in: 'He has a heart of a lion' :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This would make a great spoken word poem in my opinion. A great way to describe a warrior !

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool imagery mate, very much that of a warrior - i loved the lines:

Don't let anyone tell him whats he going to do
Shows everyone wrong when he does the impossible

that slight rhyme gives the couplet some depth. I think you mean accepts instead of excepts all challenges and in the second last line it should be that instead of 'the'.

Very cool nevertheless

Thanks for sharing

Samith

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow.... so nice imagery...... ^.^

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good imagery... :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


very nice. :d

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is good. The descriptions of this person are very vivid

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Crazo14
Crazo14

Erwin, TN



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