Hurtful words

Your words toward me are like bullets to my chest

Entering my body not being able to come out

They cant be surgically removed

Dig inside of me night and day

You can't say anything to fix it

You apologize but i can see your lies in your eyes

Saying it's all my fault when your angry

Forcing me to do all your bidding

Far to long have I've dealt with all the pain

You made  me think all your mistake were caused by my stupidity

Not thinking of what you say haunts me all night

But now I despite you 

You were a poison in my life

Killing me by seconds past

But at last I see its you 

Reviews

[Dupree]

Very strong emotional piece. As always. I love that I haven't read a random piece from you. That every piece is emotional and means something.

[alexis]

this is very relatable to lots of people.
Continue writing Crazo

[Eli Blayze]

Very good:) It is very relatable to many people. I liked the flow of it. Keep Up The Good Work:P

[Yina]

But at last I see its you
You have hope to get over an past this once you see what is the cause.
Great write. I like the way you wrote this:)

[Nameless]

"but at last i see its you" its like the light at the end of the tunnel for this. the great contrast between the rest of the poem and that one line emphasizes the importance of it. great emotion behind this.
:)

[alexlessah]

I love this, words can really hurt.

I loved the message this poem sends, though maybe you should read through it out loud and correct the spelling and errors. Other than that, I think it is quite well done.

[Megan Step]

I love it!! it is very good. I reminds me of cyber bulling or about mean rumors and someone trying to find who started it. And i think that's what draws me in relatablity.
.display. Megan
.memberID. 040
.division. IV
.division.leader. Uc
.name.Megan
.username. unknownteenager
.novels.Trace of Time
.status. New Member
.join date. 07-15-11

[Thea]

I love the part, "You were a poison in my life
Killing me by seconds past
But at last I see its you "...Great writing... :)

[Desmund Tiny]

very deep emotions...... i like it........ ^^,