Hurtful words

Hurtful words

A Poem by Crazo14

Your words toward me are like bullets to my chest
Entering my body not being able to come out
They cant be surgically removed
Dig inside of me night and day
You can't say anything to fix it
You apologize but i can see your lies in your eyes
Saying it's all my fault when your angry
Forcing me to do all your bidding
Far to long have I've dealt with all the pain
You made  me think all your mistake were caused by my stupidity
Not thinking of what you say haunts me all night
But now I despite you 
You were a poison in my life
Killing me by seconds past
But at last I see its you 

© 2011 Crazo14


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Very strong emotional piece. As always. I love that I haven't read a random piece from you. That every piece is emotional and means something.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is very relatable to lots of people.
Continue writing Crazo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good:) It is very relatable to many people. I liked the flow of it. Keep Up The Good Work:P

Posted 9 Years Ago


But at last I see its you
You have hope to get over an past this once you see what is the cause.
Great write. I like the way you wrote this:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


"but at last i see its you" its like the light at the end of the tunnel for this. the great contrast between the rest of the poem and that one line emphasizes the importance of it. great emotion behind this.
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this, words can really hurt.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I loved the message this poem sends, though maybe you should read through it out loud and correct the spelling and errors. Other than that, I think it is quite well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it!! it is very good. I reminds me of cyber bulling or about mean rumors and someone trying to find who started it. And i think that's what draws me in relatablity.
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Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the part, "You were a poison in my life
Killing me by seconds past
But at last I see its you "...Great writing... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


very deep emotions...... i like it........ ^^,

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Crazo14
Crazo14

Erwin, TN



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