Not to be

Not to be

A Poem by Crazo14

Maybe it's not true
To be with you 
I've tried to work things out
But you put doubt in my mind
You push me away
When I try to say I love you
Things will never be the same
Because the way you act around me
It's far from being ok
I don't get things you want from me
But at least I try to make you happy
If thats not good enough I gotta say
Get out of my life 
I'n not gonna take it anymore
Your too much to handle
Thorn in my heart
Took my heart and made it fade away
We always fuss and complain
About wanting to stay
But now I don't want you to stay

© 2011 Crazo14


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I'm sure everyone's felt like this at some point in time, good write, speaking for the hurt

Posted 8 Years Ago


Incredible piece. Yet again letting your emotions flow freely on the paper


Posted 9 Years Ago


It sounds like that came straight from your heart and didn't even stop in your mind because it is so good.:)
love is tough.

Posted 9 Years Ago


If that's not good enough I gotta say
Get out of my life
Love that! Sometimes you just gotta speak up for yourself!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I absolutely love this. It kind of reminds me of romeo and juliet Im not entirely sure why but eh :D great write :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I ADORE THIS, END OF.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nicely done. I like the powerful and emotion to it. It makes me think how i feel at this present time. You really do just take and take as much as you can take and thats it.... Something snaps and you realise enough is enough. Game over we are done! Powerful. Liked it alot. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked the first half because of the rhyming scheme, but I feel you could switch out some of the repetitive words near the end like "heart" and "stay". The story behind it has been told many times by many others, so it's important to add a hint of uniqueness to it and make it more true to you. I did enjoy this though.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Completely true! Love this... :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it....so powerful emotions...... ^^,

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Crazo14
Crazo14

Erwin, TN



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