For Better Or Worse

A poem on a messed up marriage.

No Loyalty
We just use and abused
We say we love
But its all lust
It's easy to say I love you
When we're both naked in bed
and having sex
It's easy to say I'll care for you
When our bodies are close together
My hands on your thigh
Staring into your eyes
Our faces are touching
Cheek to cheek
You're thinking this guy is sweet to me
I'm thinking this chick is easy for me
All I need to do is whisper
Sweet nothings into her ear
Then I gently touch her rear
She thinks I'm being sincere
But there's another girl near
Goodbye my dear
I'll cheat on you every year
At first you felt betrayed
Now you accepted
My evil ways
For better or worse
We will never divorce
Because you're loyal to me of course
And I will always love you forever more

Reviews

[writingurl14]

hum this is good... i dont really know how to review this... its sad but sweet at the same time... hope that the man will stop cheating sooner or later. but with guys... ya never know. great poem all in all

[Crazy Cat Man]

yup its based upon a friend who allows her man to cheat on her. so im done giving her advice. shes too weak to dump him and too afraid of being alone.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Sad and interesting, you made the situation very clear, almost pituresque, enjoyed the rhymes, great job :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

bright idea again
I don't really enjoy reading about marriage
but with this one I did
=]

[kingblaq]

great write... loved the flow. thanks for sharing

[BillyGirl]

Awesome write :) Sorry I didn't review sooner, though.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Mind boggling truths, the little things people try to keep hidden from everyone, always seem to be the little things people always secretly wisper throught the circle of friends.. Great write

[Beck Louise]

Great, sad message but good write :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

thanks. it was inspired by a friend who is hurt that her husband is cheating on her. now she accepts and says he needs to cheat but he doesnt love the other women. he only loves her. Oh well.....love blinds us all

[GunMetal]

Another well written piece. It's a shame that you know someone who's going through it.
I think I get that you used "horse" to rhyme with divorce, but perhaps you should end it with something else. "I have no remorse." "[somthing], of course."

[kayla]

I agree with eglantine..like a horse? lol. Everything else was great. I just didn't get that part.

[Crazy Cat Man]

due to popular demand i changed the last couple of lines :P

[eglantine]

like a horse?

[Crazy Cat Man]

like a boss

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NisCkxU544c

[That_Girl]

wtf...?

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Haha, that song is awesome! The Lonely Island rules. :D