iLost

iLost

A Poem by Crazy Cat Man
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I lost my Ipod the other day :( so I wrote this poem about it

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Damn I lost my carkeys
Where could it be
Damn I lost my cellphone
Maybe I left it at home
Damn I lost my Ipod
I blame it on God
Damn I lost my wallet
Maybe it has fallen
Damn I lost my credit card
I feel like a retard
Damn I lost my Ipad
Ugh I feel bad
Damn I lost my glasses
Where did I left it?
Damn I lost my senses
I feel reckless
Damn I lost my mind
Maybe its the wine
Damn I lost my brain
am I going insane?
Damn I lost my sanity
I'm slowly going into insanity
Damn I lost my humanity
Is it because the Knicks lost Linsanity
Damn I lost the will to live
There's nothing I can give
Damn I lost in the game of life
Now its the time to die

© 2012 Crazy Cat Man


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All that because you lost your Ipod?! o.O
It's curious how the first part is about losing objects, it's funny and even look like one of these children songs out there, but the second part change totally the mood of the poem, you talk about qualities we all should have, as human beings, and losing them is a total different thing, the bad mood of this second part reaches its peak in the very last verse.
Amazing, well done =D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mad me think (I'm in the technology industry after all) very well done I liked this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Clear and easy to follow
A very simple piece, i was less favourable of this than your other work but i think thats personal prefrence rather than any flaws in your writing.
Quite dark , but presented in a sort of comic over lay. Very interesting.

Posted 8 Years Ago


with your rhymes you make us smile and think.
why not to enjoy life, making it more simple.

Posted 8 Years Ago


LOL i like this! : ) it seems like me on an off day.


Posted 8 Years Ago


This got a bit serious towards the end... like a lot of your recent works... everything okay? lol I still love this. :) So damn true.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

Yes and that's true too :P. I just posted :D
That_Girl

8 Years Ago

I knew it! Men... so damn predictable! ;) jk jk

Awesome! I'll go look.
Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

:)
This is very very very relatable, and great job! This is excellent!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

thanks. my friend found my ipod though :P haha so maybe i should erase this poem then :P
Sounds just like my boys as they get ready to go out for the evening. Well, at least the first 16 lines or so...
Funny, the little things that can set you off, isn't it? These days, it doesn't take much!
Great stuff!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

haha yup. I felt bad for losing it....then i had to compose myself that its not the end of the world.. read more
awesome ......good job and keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


afra

8 Years Ago

Some times this happens to me too....specially in the mornings when im getting late for school and I.. read more
Crazy Cat Man

8 Years Ago

my friend found my ipod today haha he saw it on his grass and he text me. i went to pick it up haha .. read more
afra

8 Years Ago

no dont do that ...i love this poem ...

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Added on July 23, 2012
Last Updated on July 29, 2012
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