Fiery ball

Soaring summer heat

Sweat dribbling down forehead

Blood hits boiling point

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I would be glad to see the sun. Here in Michigan maybe 11 inches of snow. I prefer cold over heat. Can't escape the heat. Warm clothing keep you safe from the cold. Very good use of words. Create a good vision with the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely feedback.

[writ rajat]

can you explain it to me i could not understand it

[Praveeta]

When temperatures hit unbearable range, people lose their temper as they perspire profusely.

[writ rajat]

thanxxz for your fabulous explanation now i liked the poem

[Ahena MK]

Really wonderful... Loved the four liner
Ahena ... Keep haikuing :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your review. It is 3 lines; I have removed title, fiery ball from text area.

[Ahena MK]

Wonderful three liner then :)
Ahena

[Ahena MK]

This is actually a wonderful way to start a story... Great way to explain the weather and the emotional weather

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much.

[ZeniaK]

Mmmm this is nice, it reminds me of a warm, summer day, which is nice around the cold, winter time. I needed this kind of summer heat!

[Praveeta]

I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Bri]

This is cool. explains Stockton in the summer perfectly! It shows the hot emotion of heat!
Well done, friend.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the lovely review dear friend.

[Praveeta]

My first haiku. Hope you enjoy reading my piece.

[zainul]

Splendid work.
Nicely depicted the contemporary climatic crisis in Australia.
Keep up the good work.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for beautiful review. I highly appreciate it.

[zainul]

My pleasure,dear friend.:)

[Rene Velez]

good descriptions, well done.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely comment.

[Sami Khalil]

A fiery write that make us sweat to the boiling points of passion...Bravo on an excellent write...:)..................

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your insightful review.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).................