Remember

Remember

A Poem by Kyline Freed

How is it that I can remember the voice,
But not the words,
Remember the face,
But not the person.
Remember their fate,
But not their time.....

© 2014 Kyline Freed


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this is like an open thought

maybe a musing on someone you've forgotten?

very poetic

Posted 5 Years Ago


Great contrast! Memories are so complicated.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Kyline Freed

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Daisygirl!! Ill try and find time to read something of yours
Wisdom in this words, I really love this poem and for your young aged, wow, This is truely amazing
Greaw work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


13 Wow, what a world of knowledge in front of you and the truly profound words you write. It is amazing to me. Thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


The last two lines are especially intriguing, they leave me immersed in thought about the meaning. Really Liked it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Love the idea. The wording drew me in. Loved it. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


it's hard hitting disease I suffer from, can't stop being me.... lovely poem

Posted 6 Years Ago


A very interesting take on how memories change with time and we don't always remember what was before. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kyline Freed

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
this is pretty good i like the pattern you folllowed

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a short but well written poem you have here. I feel like I can relate to this somewhat. When i moved to a new place and met new people, they told me their names, but later on i just couldnt remember their names for the life of me( but i could remember their faces perfectly). Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Kyline Freed

6 Years Ago

Thanks! Will try and find time to read something of yours.

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Kyline Freed
Kyline Freed

Imperial, MO



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