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Forever

Forever

A Poem by Crimson Goddess
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A dream a guy I was dating at the time had that I put into poetry

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She stands there
Wind blowing through her hair
Under the old oak tree by the river
Dressed in white holding flowers in her hand
She stares out at the water with a sad look upon her face

She feels a presence beside her 
She thinks it could be just the wind
A part of her disagrees
Wishing what she felt was true
She isn't sure what to think anymore

She stands there silently crying
Not moving, she doesn't say a word
As she stares she whispers one word forever
Because that's what she promised him
She promised that she would always love him

She comes here once a year 
To throw flowers into the river
On what was supposed to be her wedding day
But the week before he drowned in the river
So instead of a happy occasion it's bitter tears

So young so beautiful yet so alone
The girl whose dream will never come true
She stands here alone at her solitary wedding.
She vowed to love him forever
That is one promise she will forever keep.

© 2012 Crimson Goddess


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This poem made me cry....
I really, really like it!!
Great imagery!
Well done!!

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very dynamic poem, written with a veracity of love that has passed...gone, but never to be forgotten. Very, very good and very well written

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Crimson Goddess

Pilot Mountain, NC



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