Loving you in fragments..

Cruelty of mind, assurance of heart, and certainty of universe.

A beseeching temptation of midnight spirit,

And I rush into enticing desires,

Forbidden whispers blossom on the floor,

And I am enveloped in the blushing bud.

 

5 years and 5 months have passed,

Still my back coils under your name,

I’ve resolved in loving another soul,

Yet like serene waves of rendering ocean,

I crash and roar and dissolve in your defied breath.

 

Years lost and spent, flashbacks forwarded,

One syllable, one word, 2 charming moments,

Reel in hushed declaration of the days.

Ribbon unfurled and the pages silently float,

Like a sepulcher I await for my lover’s tender promises.

 

One I divinely adore, till depths of trenches and beyond,

You I unconsciously love, wantonly, irrevocably, and in denial.

 

Awaiting in desperation for a sign to resign me from woe,

Woe of this fearful uncertainty,

Woe of your possibly deceiving touch,

My lips carve his name upon abrasive reality,

And my soul softly parades into a universe,

Of your delicious embrace,

Of your entrancing kisses,

Devouring recess of my neck and challenged breath.

 

Author's Note

Hope you guys love it :)

Reviews

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The 5 years and 5 month is powerful. Loved how you captured the power of love that time will not erase.
Thanks for this lovely writing.

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you for loving my little write up :) I am glad you enjoyed it :)

[Country boy183798]

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful. I like your choice of words, and the poem feel very real, and one could feel the words as he read them.
Well done and keep on writing.

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you so much, Edmund :) yet again your kind words brighten my day! thank you for liking my little piece :)

[LapseOfMind]

Powerful! Very well written. It pulled me in, rushing me through each line until sadly, it was over. Nicely done!

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you so much for loving it, really appreciate your review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. The great description made the words come alive.
"My lips carve his name upon abrasive reality,
And my soul softly parades into a universe,
Of your delicious embrace,
Of your entrancing kisses,
Devouring recess of my neck and challenged breath."
The above lines. Perfect. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you so much for loving my poetry and words, I am glad you could enjoy it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.