Dissensions

Love is never easy

Dissensions

Deep within the fire of our conflicts
When the passion obscures all reason
And words can not expel our demons
I will let you lead me through the halls of death
And through the guts of hell I shall feel no dread
For I know I'm your all in your world.

I see our struggles in time unfurl
Getting battered inside a tempest
In unrest, stressed and distressed
Yet through our eyes we see beacons
Bewitching us out of our freedom
For you know you're my all within my world.

We become lost within our might
No compromises, no direction
Doubts clouding our selections
Though somehow in distress
We are there without regrets
For we know, within our all we are our world.

Unwilling we walk through the halls of madness
Desperately looking for reasons to fall apart
Yet when the end is near our tears glue our hearts
Becoming one despite all sadness
For we are together not to conquer all
But because together we are one world.

Reviews

[Alice Aries]

NICE! Love the imagery. Love your powerful and careful word choice; it is a gift to be able to choose the write words to convey optimum meaning without pretension. The flow is just right, there are lines where you've deliberately structures words to quicken pace and/or carry sentiment. Very impressive.

[TL Boehm]

Together we are one world. That is a beautiful line.

[MsJewel]

You have created some lovely images with your beautiful words. I love the ending...
for we are together not to conquer all
but because together we are one world.
heartfelt and lovely. You have a beautiful gift.
:) Julie

[Daniel Sala]

Nice poem, nice imagery, conveys strong feelings, nice.

[Tea]

That's really cool. :) Keep writing more.

[Sami Khalil]

In this world of madness I feel the sadness and the hope to conquer adversity...Bravo

[Kitten]

beautiful poem miss Cemi! Your imagery is perfect and it all flows. The words describe perfectly love in itself, fantastic job! I would love to read more :)