I & My

I & My

A Poem by CriticalxxAngel
"

It's me who chooses & it's up to me

"

I don't want you to tell me how to live

I made my decisions

I accept my consequences

I listen to no one but myself

I will consider your opinion

but I won't follow it right away

What's right and what's wrong is put to discussion

but I have the final say

You might not agree

I don't mind if you leave me

I only need those who are true to themselves

Only want the ones who love me back

You have no right over me

Only I do

and I will accept what becomes of me.

© 2013 CriticalxxAngel


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This screams of Freedom and it is something I wish I had in my own youth, always know those next six steps of life. But you made me know what it was to be young, even for a moment and I thank you for it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CriticalxxAngel

7 Years Ago

Thank you I really appreciate it
should be "themselves"

but yes to this..."and i will accept what becomes of me"

if you can't accept it...then leave me alone...i am quite fine without you in my life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


CriticalxxAngel

8 Years Ago

Thank you I really appreciate it when people can help me better my writing
A poweful statement of compassionate love for the self you have penned here...:)
I love it! For you cannot argue with it, or judge it....it is what it is.,...:)
And if we all acted and behaved in this way, then the world could be a more happy, balanced place...

Thanks for sharing this uplifting write...:)
BB

Posted 8 Years Ago


CriticalxxAngel

8 Years Ago

thank you for taking a look at the true meaning behind my writing beacause I want my fellow writers .. read more
Buddhistboy73

8 Years Ago

You're welcome....:)
BB

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Added on April 13, 2013
Last Updated on April 16, 2013
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