I & My

A Poem by CriticalxxAngel

It's me who chooses & it's up to me

I don't want you to tell me how to live

I made my decisions

I accept my consequences

I listen to no one but myself

I will consider your opinion

but I won't follow it right away

What's right and what's wrong is put to discussion

but I have the final say

You might not agree

I don't mind if you leave me

I only need those who are true to themselves

Only want the ones who love me back

You have no right over me

Only I do

and I will accept what becomes of me.

© 2013 CriticalxxAngel

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MoriartyMesa

This screams of Freedom and it is something I wish I had in my own youth, always know those next six steps of life. But you made me know what it was to be young, even for a moment and I thank you for it.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you I really appreciate it

jacob erin-cilberto

should be "themselves"

but yes to this..."and i will accept what becomes of me"

if you can't accept it...then leave me alone...i am quite fine without you in my life.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Thank you I really appreciate it when people can help me better my writing

Buddhistboy73

A poweful statement of compassionate love for the self you have penned here...:)
I love it! For you cannot argue with it, or judge it....it is what it is.,...:)
And if we all acted and behaved in this way, then the world could be a more happy, balanced place...

Thanks for sharing this uplifting write...:)
BB