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A Poem by CriticalxxAngel

Stop telling me what to do,

When to do it and how,

I despise being ordered around,

I'm not a dog,

I'm a free spirit,

Don't ask for my opinion,

Even if you don't want it to be heard I will voice it,

I have my own thoughs and emotions,

I have delt with more than you can imagine,

I've been scarred by your commands,

I will rebel,

and choose what I believe is right.

© 2013 CriticalxxAngel

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You definitely release built up agression through this piece. The pain and the energy is loud and potent. Very powerful... would be nice to see a Part 2 to this to see how it all panned out.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Yeah im thinking about doing a second part but thank you for liking something that came from my hear.. read more

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Added on April 14, 2013
Last Updated on April 14, 2013
Tags: stop, despise, free, opinion, thoughts, emotions, rebel, command, right, imagine, poetry, poem, sad