A Poem by CriticalxxAngel

I'm not fake

I only hide the truth

I am very honest

but no one wants to know

My emotions and feelings are shattered

No one seems to care

When I break

They turn away

When they're in need

They come back to me

I accept

But I tell myself to deny

A smile is on my surface

But my pain is still stuck inside

© 2013 CriticalxxAngel

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This is easy to relate to in that it gives a voice to everyone feeling this way so thanks for sharing. Enough said.

Posted 8 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

Thanks alot I really appreciate it
You seemed to write a biography of my life in this poem. Unfortunately, no matter what stage of life we're in, internal pain and disappointment exists. "When I break... they turn away" rings so true to me. Self reliance is key to survival.

This was superb in content and style.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you so much it really means alot.
So sad and deep... raw and filled with emotions.... keep writing ... and keep your head up !!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you
true feelings ! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on May 8, 2013
Last Updated on May 8, 2013
Tags: stuck, fake, honest, truth, feelings, emotions, care, shatter, accept, deny, surface, inside, sad, hurt, alone, poem, poetry