A Poem by CriticalxxAngel

Something that I think about when theres a hard time



Failure doesn't matter

Just the fact that we tried


Mistakes help us do better

Success gives us drive


Moments pass in seconds

We have only one life


We stick together

In order to win our fights


Don't give up on tomorrow

Look for the future in today


Forgive what already took place

Move in a calm pace


Enjoy the mysteries in life

Find happinness at all times


And appreciate what already happened

Because being alive is it's own joy

© 2013 CriticalxxAngel

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Very good advice. Nicely penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Lovely stuff is this a note to yourself? I think the first three lines are the most relevant

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

yes I often tell myself that and thanks it means a lot that you enjoyed it
*sniff* I could really feel the emotion in this poem. I would love to see you write a story!

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

Thanks I appreciate it and I will try to write one in the future :)

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Added on June 10, 2013
Last Updated on June 10, 2013
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