No one Cares

No one Cares

A Poem by CriticalxxAngel

I'm tired of being alone
of having no one
I want to leave
This life
This world
I don't want to do what others tell me
I don't want to be their slave
I want someone to care
To tell me they're there
Someone who won't change me
I need someone
To understand
that I'm hurting
crying 
all alone
At the edge
I can''t handle it 
not anymore
No one wants to help
No one wants to notice the scars 
I've tried to improve 
I've tried to get help
but no one really looks
at the tears that are shed in the open
or the pain that I show in my eyes.

© 2013 CriticalxxAngel


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I hear ya' so many people feel this way, the trouble is even if we all get together to support each other that doesn't work.. I guess being alone is a way of life and it can only be fixed when the right kinda people come around.. hang in there and this was very expressive and filled with emotion good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I feel that no one can understand us if we don't risk putting ourselves into the line of fire and exposing our inner emotions. It's nothing easy, but it must be done sometime in our lives. We can't trust everyone, but only those who are most patient, deserving and appreciative of it. Letting people know how we feel is such a difficult, yet powerful step for any of us...but it all takes time, perhaps it's best to pen it to paper until you can verbally say those certain words to people.

Posted 10 Years Ago


CriticalxxAngel

10 Years Ago

Those are some very true points and I gotta say that I completely agree with what you have to say
A fine write, you write well for such a young poet, good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


CriticalxxAngel

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
:( well this is a sad poem....I can relate to some of the feelings, I think all of us can. I actually had an emotional melt down the other day xD not just because of some of these reasons but others adding up probably. Everyone reaches a point when they really need someone at that very moment, and when no one seems to be there that is what really drags us down. I sorry you feel this way and hope you cheer up, it is good that you write though that seems to help.

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


CriticalxxAngel

10 Years Ago

Thank you that means a lot
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, if you ever want to talk to someone you could message me I'm a good listener lol

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Added on October 7, 2013
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Tags: tired, alone, leave, life, world, slave, help, care, change. understand, hurt, hurting, crying, handle, scars, improve, shed, eyes, sad