Not Everything
A Poem by
CriticalxxAngel
Last poem I will post from my anthology about change
Realization hits.
As you take a step into the cold world
Not everything is happy;
Not everything is good.
There are many gruesome truths
That are hidden,
Like a puzzle that will remain incomplete.
A silent cry
Which stays unheard.
A fallen tear
Which leaves no trace.
A sting of pain
Like a winter breeze upon your skin.
A hurt feeling
As you realize nothing is the same.
Not everything is easy;
Not everything is free.
Everyone changes
In an instant,
Like a lifetime flashing by in a blink of an eye .
A sweet memory
That lasts forever
Becomes a goodbye
That puts an end to everything you once knew.
© 2014 CriticalxxAngel
Reviews
I admire the fact that you do not rush into rhymes, which I am guilty of myself. Forcing rhymes can sometimes steal the magic of words. You portrayed ''change'' eloquently. I appreciated this. Well penned.
Posted 7 Years Ago
almost a sad look at life..a realization that rainbows and unicorns will turn to monsters in time as age colors your vision with the things hidden to a child.
I like this.
Very well done..
Scott
Posted 7 Years Ago
almost a sad look at life..a realization that rainbows and unicorns will turn to monsters in time as age colors your vision with the things hidden to a child.
I like this.
Very well done..
Scott
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Added on January 8, 2014
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