My Poems

My Poems

A Poem by christopher fox
"

This was written march 14th 2015, and is how I feel about my poetry.

"
Writing terrible things
The word choice 
I choose
The worst calamity
As reading on
Booze
Maybe its how
I write--
Might explain 
Many things
The demonstrative power
That memory never
Rings
Hinges towards truth
But falls very short
Tries to bridge the gap
But builds the shanty
Fort.
All alone with words
Never making the connection
The flow itself hurts
But I write
Never making a correction.

© 2015 christopher fox


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Strong thoughts in the poetry.
"The flow itself hurts
But I write
Never making a correction."
I believe we write what we feel. Most writing is free-flowing. I liked the above lines. Sometimes words come from hidden places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

Strong thoughts in the poetry.
"The flow itself hurts
But I write
Never making a correction."
I believe we write what we feel. Most writing is free-flowing. I liked the above lines. Sometimes words come from hidden places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
613
This was written so well! Great job.

- Brittney

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

christopher fox

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
613

7 Years Ago

You're welcome!

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

244 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on March 22, 2015
Last Updated on April 20, 2015
Tags: poem, bad poetry, ryhme, truth

Author

christopher fox
christopher fox

Colorado Springs, CO



About
I'm 24 and have been writing my whole life. I began to share my work in 2014, and haven't gotten the performance side down just yet. I was on episode 703 "Shock" of the Risk podcast, and that record.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..