Look

Look

A Poem by Crosby Idasa
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The World is full of s**t... look at what is happening

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Look at America
What type of thing is this
They legalize same sex activities
What type of rubbish is that
Now other countries are making it legal
All because they’re the world power

Look at Nigeria
What type of thing is this
They still can’t get electrical power
What type of rubbish is that
They stay in darkness day and night
All because of corruption and tricks

See America again
What type of thing is this
They are still practicing racism
What type of rubbish is that
White police killing blacks
All because of jealousy and hatred

Look at India
What type of thing is this
The Prime minister is after a new home
What type of rubbish is that
COVID-19 is wiping the citizens
But he is after luxury and enjoyment

© 2021 Crosby Idasa


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Crosby  Idasa
The World is coming to an end...

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I agree my friend. In the USA, drugs killed 500 plus kids in Detroit alone. People will burn down a city for one death. Almost 100,000 killed using drugs. Where are the people pissed-off at the drug dealers? I know, this is a world problem. I lost four brothers to drugs. We need to gain sanity. Instead of fighting. Help each other. Powerful and strong words shared. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

True... the meek and the poor will gain survive
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Look at the great Roman empire. Those with less, took Rome from the empire. People, who have little... read more
Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Yes Sir, I’m doing fine



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I agree my friend. In the USA, drugs killed 500 plus kids in Detroit alone. People will burn down a city for one death. Almost 100,000 killed using drugs. Where are the people pissed-off at the drug dealers? I know, this is a world problem. I lost four brothers to drugs. We need to gain sanity. Instead of fighting. Help each other. Powerful and strong words shared. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

True... the meek and the poor will gain survive
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Look at the great Roman empire. Those with less, took Rome from the empire. People, who have little... read more
Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Yes Sir, I’m doing fine
racism is everywhere, I dislike it when people are that way. We all are but one in God's eyes. You are right, this world is coming to and end..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

4 Months Ago

Thank you for accepting that it is true, Good review from you.
Okay yeah racism is a problem here in America but I don't agree with your same sex marriage thing because there's nothing wrong with that I'm sorry that there's downfall in most countries like no electricity it's a shame

Posted 4 Months Ago


Crosby  Idasa

4 Months Ago

Nice review, but we all know the right way sex should be done. It should be by the opposite sex gend.. read more
Tina

4 Months Ago

We will agree to disagree
Crosby  Idasa

4 Months Ago

Yeah, true
Although I disagree on the same sex thing...to each his or her own...and it really doesn't hurt anyone else...but on the other points in this poem....
I want to pick up a sign and start protesting with you.
rancid racism...we haven't come a long way from 1964 at all. We are having much police brutality even against whites, although that is seldom a topic of discussion...but yes, too much violence and hatred in the world...I grow so weary of it. And then even on a poetry site, some of the behavior is abhorrent...
and this is poetry, for God's sake...Voices that should just be crying out for peace.
And to have a leader live in luxury while others suffer, that is a crisis in itself.
Very fluently expressed here, Crosby.
j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for such a good review. Appreciated
Where I agree with you is where Nigeria and India have leaders who clearly don't care about their own people. I find it ridiculous that India have a space programme but don't have sufficient vaccines. Abd ridiculous that Nigeria can't get electric power. Poor Leadership. Regarding your other points racism is abhorrent and American police kill whites too. As for same sex activities, that is there business and I'm pleased I live in a part of the work where tolerance is shown. You actually convey your points well in your stanzas, even though our views differ Crosby. Always happy to read your work.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

4 Months Ago

Thank you Christine, Good review. I appreciate
Chris Shaw

4 Months Ago

Happy to review you Crosby.
Crosby  Idasa

4 Months Ago

So cool
Chris.

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Port Harcourt, Rivers state, Nigeria



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