Win

Win

A Poem by Crosby Idasa
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A motivational poem to uplift those that feel they are never going to make it

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They still want to hurt
Even with all the love and care
They still hate you
What else do you do
Mind your business and move

We always want to win
Even when it seems we’re losing
They still fight us
What else should we do
Play stronger and win

You should never give up
Even if it seems shaded and blind
They still block you
What else do you do
Work better and strive

© 2021 Crosby Idasa


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Crosby  Idasa
Just a piece I thought will touch you

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I agree Crosby.
"You should never give up
Even if it seems shaded and blind
They still block you
What else do you do
Work better and strive"
The above lines are true. We must leave the naysayers in the dust and we must go forward. Thank you for sharing your amazing and worthwhile thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

You welcome Boss, thanks for your kind review
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I ain't the boss. Just Grandpa Coyote and you are welcome my friend.
Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Lol... Okay Sir, Jah bless



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It touches me in this sense. I think of those feelings of betrayal we experience. Our self-esteem drops and we lose faith in ourselves to succeed. Those feelings always try to beat us down, but we can beat them back. And we must.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


I agree Crosby.
"You should never give up
Even if it seems shaded and blind
They still block you
What else do you do
Work better and strive"
The above lines are true. We must leave the naysayers in the dust and we must go forward. Thank you for sharing your amazing and worthwhile thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

You welcome Boss, thanks for your kind review
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

I ain't the boss. Just Grandpa Coyote and you are welcome my friend.
Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Lol... Okay Sir, Jah bless
People always want to try and stop you from being successful. We must never give up no matter how hard people try to make it for us. Great poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

That’s true, jealousy and envy is always there to make them stop your success but one needs to loo.. read more
Perseverance can pay off. Never give up in what you truly believe in. Motivation is key.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Thank you for such a lifting review, give down to World and you get your pay.
I like the motivation in this poem. thanks that is kind of what i needed right now. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

You are welcome eaglefeather, thanks for such a kind review

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Crosby  Idasa
Crosby Idasa

Port Harcourt, Rivers state, Nigeria



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