I do

Lost in silence

        ...Golden silence..

Time stops its magic flow

           Calming sense of purity..

   Tears fall from the magic fauctes

So beautiful...

          While on one knee

Angels wings beating rapidly...

                Is the sound of a heartbeat

Thump..thump..thump..

         Sweat falls as the heat rises

    Agonizing pause...

Waiting and wishing..

                  The time is now..

 A time to forever changing lives...

  Waiting for those innocent and pure words

The ones to lift all spirits and join in the world of hope

           Tic tok..tic tok...

And then..

              ..It happens...

The words are said...

               And ringing sound buzzes into ears

 Feeling the weight of the world lifted!

  Those words will never be forgotton...

            Those sweet words...

 From a voice of an angel...

               The words that say

 "I do"

 

 

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

Great piece. I enjoyed it very much and I love the description and how you put everything together, pretty unique to what I've been reading. Well done!

[Cricket Kidd]

The only thing that bugged me, was the word fauctes. I think you mean faucets.
other than that, excellent work! I love the simile and imagery.

[dreaming dame]

:) Love it. :) beautiful. :)

[Clever Forever]

Beautiful piece.

[Luchia Noname]

so sweet and beautiful nice job :)

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Beautifully written, sweet and soft like the words themselves. Amazing write.

[Lily Mae]

I think this is great.. I really enjoyed it.. An excellent write..x