A Lost Race

Envious, raging, thrashing all about

Tainting the purity of forgotten lands.

A sheet of tears unfolds onto the world

So blind are we....

So blind are we.

Bustling cities with lights of evil

Scattered across the world..

..The shattered world

Do you not hear her cry?...

She cries under the blanket of dark

The stars light has become dim..

                         When will the light end?

    As good verses evil collides

              It shall become one.

To see the highest peaks of this land fall

      Crumble down into the pit of the world...

 Our world. 

     Hear the wailing of the land as it dies

IT DIES FROM US!

      May the race end, so time shall heal..

And one day..

   They will return..

As the redemption of humans. 

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

Honest and emotional. Great work, truly. I enjoyed reading it and it brought out a lot of emotions, for me. :)

[Clever Forever]

I really like this. It flows really well and it says so much...it's a very strong piece. Sad but extremely powerful.

[Greg Skura]

Yes indeed the fall of humanity all teeters, on our ability to rise out the dark into the light. And if total destruction is required for a purification, I say push the button, and I will smile and wave.................p.s. see you on the flip side.............!

[Hayley]

Yes, the truth is harsh, isn't it? Predictions are, even thinking sometimes is. I like the rhythm of this piece, the emotion that is so clear. Glad you're back!

[Lily Mae]

I had so many emotions with this rise up inside me.. You have hit on so many raw truths.. well done..xo