slumber land

Softly it called to me.

Sweetly it beckoned my attention.

Come away, without a care, it call’s yet again.

Just close your eyes, my friend.

Ill Mesmerize, Entangle, Enlighten, Enrich.

You’ll be better in no time.

I’ll make sure of it.

Together we will ride.

Through the chasm of imagination, we will fly.

Where all of your desires come true, without a hitch.

And just before you come back begging for more.

From the pool of eternity, we will sip.

Author's Note

not quite sure about the layout of this. Also not sure what category of writing style this falls under. Any help would be appreciated. Thank you.

Reviews

[Nessly]

I like the mystical aura this poem gives.

As far as the layout goes try experimenting with punctuation and line placement Create stanzas where, and if necessary. Also pay attention to how they poem flows when read.

Hope this helps!