Lost Love

Lost Love

A Poem by Wild Rose

Love Lost



You were there every day

Your pale unblemished skin, long auburn hair

So beautiful, always pleasant and caring

You inspired confidence in me

Yet even when physically close

You were apart a barrier between us

 

I came into your office

Not knowing it would be you that I would meet

We forgot the original reason that I came for

Talked about old times - people from our past

We both wished to get closer to the other

Sadly now it is too late

Too many ties that could not be broken now

We must go our own ways

Wild Rose 2019

© 2019 Wild Rose


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Such a wistful sadness in your poem. You've found and laid words that show the past as an often sad creature. Perhaps best laid to rest. Yet to have felt as you did, and now write about, at least shows that what there was, was memorable enough to recall. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you Emma
I was never really sad. My love was the freedom obtained from riding out into .. read more



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What I like most about your message - it realistically describes how we can be sooooo close, desiring more closeness, but sometimes an unbridgeable gap remains between people. So often humans go around in an imperfect state of "connecting"! Your poem conveys a hint of regret mingled with a hint of acceptance (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

School friends Seen in class
Kept apart by the system
Different entrances< Play grou.. read more
Amazing use of description and memories shared. Some people never leave our memories. Thank you Wild Rose for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you some remain simply as names.
Others leave images in memory

What was.. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

A wonderful poem my friend.
To leave those is not so lost. Yet there seems to be time in places we can still go to.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Yes Jason
The time and place cannot be made
They occur as if by magic
By a hi.. read more
Sometimes seperate ways the best way- sad but best- emotional and deep- well expressed 🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

A case of unspoken attraction (loved from afar > Got on with life. Until a face from the past turned.. read more
Train track love.
The closeness will always be there.
But they will never be a meeting of hearts, even though you're in their thoughts most days.
Sad poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Thanks > not heard the phrase 'Train Track Love'
No sadness when we met > old school friends .. read more
Paul Bell

1 Year Ago

Good to keep in touch.
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Rye
certain amount of sadness in this write, but so well expressed. emotional piece

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Only sadness was that we hadn't made more of our friendship at the time
There is sadness, but also a bit of beauty to be found here. After a long while of being apart, it's a beautiful thing to see how love rekindles itself. I have yet to experience such a thing, but have thought I'd like to.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Lets say Childhood sweetheart Both too timid to say
Never forgotten until a chance meeting an.. read more
Such a wistful sadness in your poem. You've found and laid words that show the past as an often sad creature. Perhaps best laid to rest. Yet to have felt as you did, and now write about, at least shows that what there was, was memorable enough to recall. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

Thank you Emma
I was never really sad. My love was the freedom obtained from riding out into .. read more
What the years have put asunder can't be stitched back together. Too much water under the bridge. A poignant write Wild Rose and a very good morning to you from sunny Torquay.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

1 Year Ago

She was a real beauty > scared to ask incase I got turned down - she was the same
Year later.. read more

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Wild Rose

Lake Disrtict, Cumbria, United Kingdom



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