The Truth

my heart wants to love
my mind says other wise

give me a chance
and I'll break your heart
 

can my heart afford
what my mind can't give?

Reviews

[The realest]

Truth indeed, simple but the format adds to the mood of the poem making you look at each stanza individually like seperate thoughts- well written

[THE BLACK SEAL]

i like the form you used it added to this. say should be says but other than that good

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

Interesting format- simplisitic and yet it speaks volumes- though I wonder about the middle line- it seems threatening where the rest seems as if crying out. But then that is just my opinnion; not sure if you meant it that way but that is how it comes across.