Seperation, of the seperate lives.

Seperation, of the seperate lives.

A Poem by Melinda Weber

A kiss is delicate and simple,

Without  the love and lies.

That tempting smile with a dimple,

Hides the fangs in your disguise.

I wish that I could tell you,

I never planned it at all.

I wish you could understand how,

Hard it was for me to fall.

 

I know there is a hate and anger,

Swirling in your pride.

I know from the truth,

You choose to deny and hide.

The hurting that you’re feeling

Is forever my burden and guilt

You’ll never realize the amount of blood,

I have painfully spilt.


To take it all back,

I know I wouldn’t.

To go back to what it was,

Inside I know I couldn’t.

I choose to steal,

A sunrise over a sunset.

To live a life,

 I won’t fear or regret.

© 2012 Melinda Weber


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Very beautifully expressed , your language is rich and I could fully relate to your words , there is no point to stay when love faded ... I know you will move on , but also love that you wait a min . looking back on your former love and understand his feelings

Posted 8 Years Ago


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No regret, yeah. great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Interesting poem. I like how it starts to rhyme, but loses the pattern and goes into a free verse style. Also how it contradicts itself a bit, "the hurting that you're feeling inside Is forever my burden and guilt" then "To take it ll back, I know I wouldn't" and "To live a life I won't fear or regret." It's very realistic and wholistic towards true emotions. Thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice expression, it flows very well and portrays a nice sense of emotion. Good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautifully expressed , your language is rich and I could fully relate to your words , there is no point to stay when love faded ... I know you will move on , but also love that you wait a min . looking back on your former love and understand his feelings

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever... you used rhyme well in the first two verses and then broke the rhythm in the final verse to break out into the freedom you wanted and needed...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I really like your rhyming here, it really helps the poem get its emotions out!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Melinda Weber
Melinda Weber

Wonderland, Australia



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Hmmm, about me....Extreme day dreamer. Friend of unicorns, fluffly things and most humans :) Freelance adventurer and writing ninja :) My experiences with love, heavily influence my writing. Not j.. more..

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