Amour

I feel you making me weaken,

Each brick inside falling from the wall

You have me slowly crumbling,

Unstitching at the seams with your every touch.

 

      You delicately peel these layers away,

                           Gently unwrapping who I am.

                               I adore listening to you, hypnotized

          To the whispers of your truths,

                          The honesty of your lies.

 

I wish to luxuriously retire,

to the chambers of your heart,

Trickling through the cracks of your soul.

You have won the battle, my love

Like a true chevalier en armure étincelante,

You have set me free, no longer a hostage.

 

                        For the rest of these days, 

                             You are mine,

                 As I am yours

                           In this wonderland. 

Reviews

[Siegfried]

Lyrical, delightful in metaphorical truths. You've written an inspire love sonnet, with rules modified in leisurely ways. Nicely done.

[joshua deathdealer]

This is such a beautiful poem.Well done.

[Patrick]

you're writing reminds me of a friend i have on here..it's quite captivating and very striking..will read more :)

[zainul]

Fabulous.

[Reaper]

amazing

[Lynn Carrie]

Wow! I like this. I want to read this over and over again.

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful. Just beautiful

[Ruth]

This is interesting love! Unsettling in a way too, the soul caved into that love, very clever write! All consuming is love and you portray that so well here xoxo

[Eve Brown]

Wow, this was..beautiful. :)