Amour

I feel you making me weaken,

Each brick inside falling from the wall

You have me slowly crumbling,

Unstitching at the seams with your every touch.

 

      You delicately peel these layers away,

                           Gently unwrapping who I am.

                               I adore listening to you, hypnotized

          To the whispers of your truths,

                          The honesty of your lies.

 

I wish to luxuriously retire,

to the chambers of your heart,

Trickling through the cracks of your soul.

You have won the battle, my love

Like a true chevalier en armure étincelante,

You have set me free, no longer a hostage.

 

                        For the rest of these days, 

                             You are mine,

                 As I am yours

                           In this wonderland. 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I just read this again and again
it blew me away.
This is the most romantic of
the romantic if somewhat erotic
poems. Floating on currents of
your creativity . Thank you .
---- John

[TKBickel]

I don't really know how to do a good review for poetry but as a reader, I enjoyed it.

[Ms.Bri]

..That was such a beautiful poem. I liked it very descriptive. Great job

[Sarah E. Pearson]

Amazing poem. Truly beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. I like the way the poem flowed into a positive and happy ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Hachamecha]

Like it :)

[Richard Layne]

nicely written

[Lina Grey]

Beautiful. So romantic, full of imagery and emotion. Great job. Thank you.

[Adalynn]

Wonderful descriptions. I loved reading this..

Great write.

Adalynn

[rosemary keogh]

such a beautifull poem.