tired

tired of this,

tired of you,

your nothing to me,

i'm sick of love,i'm sick of tears,

i'm sick of good bye,

sick of that last kiss,

that's always in the back of your mind,

sick of hatred,sick of life,

being so hard

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I know the feeling of this poem. Hid in bar and taverns for many years. In the end we must surface and find the right place to be. Strong emotion made this poem a excellent poem to read.
Coyote

[Spice]

thank you joshua

[joshua deathdealer]

When I read this it felt fast paced and the images went well. Almost like a song. Great write.

[Spice]

why thank yu for your nice responce

[Pencrafter]

Sounds like the end of a relationship gone bad. Your poem does well in conveying the emotion and hurt. The seventh line about 'in the back of your mind' I was thinking maybe you meant 'in the back of my mind'. No biggie. I appreciate the simple lines and clear statements. Your poem is a powerful expression in a short statement.

[Cree Nations]

oh Wow. You have voiced how I have often felt. Good write.