Skilled Surgeon

Skilled Surgeon

A Poem by Pale Rose

I’m a skilled surgeon--
Cutting out slivers of heart
With my exact knife.

This sharp blade I wield--
Precision to reduce the size
Of a (perhaps) too-large heart.

But cut out enough--
What would would be left?

You were the victim--
The one under the scalpel.

This sharp blade I wield--
Cut off the biggest part.


Now that you are gone--
How could the heart still beat?


Now that you are gone--
How could I still be?

© 2012 Pale Rose


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Beautiful! I feel the pain behind those words

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow! This is really well written. I was really able to feel the emotion and really connect with the poem . A very powerful analogy.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on August 31, 2012
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Pale Rose
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Poetry is the ultimate expression of humanity. It is the only tool we have to express the depth of our emotions and suffering. As for my own, I see the dark side of life and find it beautiful. I seek .. more..

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