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Goodbye eternity

Goodbye eternity

A Poem by Pale Rose

Goodbye eternity.

Proudly fade,

Never taking breath,

Or feeling sunlight,

Seeing the stars,

Or knowing pain.


If you could speak,

I know you would thank me,

For keeping you away,

From this misguided world,

Which rejects those like us--

Rations for feelings,

Lighter with knowledge--


What kind of a life is hate,

With our savagery and guts,

Guiding our lives like facts?


So I said goodbye.

You silently float down,

Into forever,

Into nothing.

© 2021 Pale Rose


Author's Note

Pale Rose
I'm always accepting of feedback. I would like to improve my poetry, or it's just nice to know someone resonated with what I wrote.

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I think this is the story of someone's heart, I think if you can do that, then you can do great things. Good job and please continue writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the visualization as it refers to eternity. The
end, ..." into forever, into nothing" had me reading it again. Please keep writing and creating.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 21, 2017
Last Updated on March 30, 2021
Tags: dark poetry, sad, abortion, nihilism

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Pale Rose
Pale Rose

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Poetry is the ultimate expression of humanity. It is the only tool we have to express the depth of our emotions and suffering. As for my own, I see the dark side of life and find it beautiful. I seek .. more..

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A Poem by Pale Rose