Mine tiny line

Mine tiny line,

Twists to shine,

Like a vine.

Mine tiny line,

As red as wine:

A salient sign.

Mine tiny line

Will not resign,

Will not decline;

It’s a shrine

To pain divine.

Never thine:

It is mine--

Mine tiny line.

Author's Note

Very simple, but very carefully crafted. I hope you think so too.

Reviews

[LappelDuVide]

I like this. So simple but beautiful. Ambiguous.

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

Mine-
could it perhaps be replaced with my?
I can't help thinking this entire piece could make so much more since if it was...

[Chirpy!]

Is this about cutting? If its not, don't be insulted! this is a really good poem!

[Girlintheworld]

Very good choice of ryhming words. It is simple but crafty and I must say - Job well done!!

[run vs remember]

Yeah, I can tell. I like it.