Missing you

Missing you

A Poem by D.pyne

This is a poem about friendship gone wrong.


For all the things I said to you,

 for all the times I tried,

My obssesion with pleasing you

and all the times I lied.


Watching you from a distance,

tears spring to my eyes.

What went wrong with our realationship?

O, how time does fly.


Sometime I'll come see you

and hope it'll be worth while.

Sometimes I want to be you,

I miss seeing your smile.


I'd take back all the things I said,

I didn't mean them to be true.

Because I only realized now

how much I miss you.

© 2010 D.pyne

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I love the desperation, a lovely sequel could be the apology? Oh and there is a small spelling error where you have decided 'I' and 'Miss' needed to be one word. Unless that was on purpose.

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Added on September 16, 2010
Last Updated on October 10, 2010
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