Tailor

Tailor

A Poem by DarlingDarjeeling
"

Do your work

"

11/11/17


You thread the needle carefully

And begin to sew the air

Working tirelessly at the nonexistent seams

Accomplishing nothing.

There is nothing here for you to do.

© 2017 DarlingDarjeeling


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Wow! I loved the mood in this poem. So short, yet it sent chills down my spine. I felt it really captured the frustration of helplessness. The feeling of endlessly doing your best, but it never being enough.
Good work and a thoughtful little poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarlingDarjeeling

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the comments, it is much appreciated! :)
Monatora

6 Years Ago

No problem :)

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Added on November 12, 2017
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Tags: tailor, thread, needle, nothing, existentialism, crisis

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