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Relation Ships

Relation Ships

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
"

a Haiku poem in 3 lines

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A Relation Ship,

tested against storm tossed seas,

sails home on a breeze.

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Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

including images of the natural world

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© 2021 Dylan Macadham


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dear Dylan.. if only that were True… I would not be so Blue. tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

1 Month Ago

Maybe wishful thinking on my part, huh?
A Nice Rhyming Review ...Sent by You :)
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

Actually, your Poem is worth Framing with a Golden Frame… simply a lovely Haiku that describes Sto.. read more
Simply Amazing, I love this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Thanks again, Alex!
Clever play on words. Weathering the storms together and then enjoying the plain sailing in calmer waters. Yep that's relationships for you. Sometimes you hit inclement weather. You've got to be a good sailor at times :)

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Thanks Chris, "Clever" is music to my Inner Praise-Seeker :)
Red sky at night, sailors deligh.. read more
This is a fantastic haiku, possibly one of the best I've seen in a minute. This is what relationships are all about, weathering the storms and trying to become stronger in order to be able to "sail home on a breeze". Good job! :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Thanks Haley :)
...maybe there's a planet out there where relationships don't have to be work.. read more
This might contain the key to why I've been relation shipless for the past 30 years. It's always felt wiser to avoid seasickness (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

...at last! Common-Sense Avoidance, wish I'd thought of that! (actually I did, and even practiced it.. read more

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Added on November 16, 2021
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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