Mysterious Ways ...

Mysterious Ways ...

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
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a Haiku poem in 3 lines

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If I were a god,

mysterious, all my days,

I’d change my darn ways. 

.......

Haiku: Japanese poem of 17 syllables in 3 lines of 5, 7 & 5, 

traditionally including images of the natural world

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© 2021 Dylan Macadham


Author's Note

Dylan Macadham
...Why the mystery ?

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Yes, too much mystery is a pain in the backside. Show yourself, says I. Give us a little bit of encouragement. And that Dylan doesn't just apply to the Almighty. It applies to one or two men I have known in the real world,, who appear to be a bit on the reluctant
side to reveal anything about themselves. (maybe because they are up to no good) That is taking mystery too far. It turns from being attractive to plain old boring. Now look what you have done with a three liner:)Ha! Pandora's box has opened :) So much can be read into your lines. Well done you.

Chris



Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Hi Chris :)
Three main reasons a man doesn't reveal much about himself to women: (1) He inwar.. read more



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Yes, too much mystery is a pain in the backside. Show yourself, says I. Give us a little bit of encouragement. And that Dylan doesn't just apply to the Almighty. It applies to one or two men I have known in the real world,, who appear to be a bit on the reluctant
side to reveal anything about themselves. (maybe because they are up to no good) That is taking mystery too far. It turns from being attractive to plain old boring. Now look what you have done with a three liner:)Ha! Pandora's box has opened :) So much can be read into your lines. Well done you.

Chris



Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Hi Chris :)
Three main reasons a man doesn't reveal much about himself to women: (1) He inwar.. read more
very well written and said

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Months Ago

Thanks Alex :)

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Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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