Open and Shut

Open and Shut

A Poem by Dylan Macadham
"

Senryu!

"
Daydreams beat nightdreams
because our eyes are wide open, 
not fitfully shut.
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© 2025 Dylan Macadham


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Amazing write, much enjoyed

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks poetgurl!
poetgurl

2 Weeks Ago

....not a problem
Excellent work. This brevity says a lot.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dylan Macadham

2 Weeks Ago

Less is More :) Thanks!

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Added on January 9, 2025
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Dylan Macadham
Dylan Macadham

Seattle, WA



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