Hot Spell

Hot Spell

A Poem by Daniel Eaves
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Heat

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A desert afternoon

Dogs baked flat in the yards

 

The mirage Shangri-La

Condensation on jars

© 2013 Daniel Eaves


Author's Note

Daniel Eaves
Think it's short? I was originally going to go with just the first two lines.

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It is great: little bullets of lines that shoot straight to our hearts with their pictures. This is the brevity and eloquence that is poetry. It doesn't have to rhyme, it doesn't have to be long, it doesn't have to be filled with arcane rubbish of silly words no one uses. It has to SING. Yours SUNG.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Eaves

10 Years Ago

Thank you ever so much Annie, I think that's the nicest thing anyone's ever said about any of my wor.. read more



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It is great: little bullets of lines that shoot straight to our hearts with their pictures. This is the brevity and eloquence that is poetry. It doesn't have to rhyme, it doesn't have to be long, it doesn't have to be filled with arcane rubbish of silly words no one uses. It has to SING. Yours SUNG.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daniel Eaves

10 Years Ago

Thank you ever so much Annie, I think that's the nicest thing anyone's ever said about any of my wor.. read more
A unique write. I don't get it ( except from the title )but I like it...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 26, 2013
Last Updated on September 26, 2013
Tags: hot, summer, heatwave, sun, shangri-la, mirage, poem

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