Blindness of Insanity

They say that I'm crazy. 
That I'm out of my mind. 
Am I really insane? 
Or are you just blind? 
The world is a chest, 
and we're all trapped inside. 
Controlled by a force, 
and have nowhere to hide. 

The walls, they listen! 
Beware of their ears! 
The shadow knows what you say, 
so don't tell your fears. 
The eyes, the eyes! 
They're always around. 
Through boxes and bulbs, 
your movements are found. 

The man in the shadows. 
He controls what you do. 
You'll not even know of your strings, 
till your life is all through. 
You dance to his sounds, 
and watch his screen glow. 
He controls what you see. 
He controls what you know. 

Fool open your eyes! 
Your whole world is a lie! 
The truth is easy to see. 
Just give it a try, 
because He says that I'm crazy. 
Am I really insane? 
Or are you just blind? 

Reviews

[Silver Tree]

Interesting, good work. =)

[Derrick Gates]

I like how you use perceptions of society and everything you see in everyday life. Asweome!

[Lina Grey]

very powerful. love the concept. great job :)

[Lonesome Traveler]

This is lovely, feels like it be made into lyrics with a few tweaks.

[Black Rose]

I love your poem,it's amazing!

[DriDri]

Thank you !

[DriDri]

Thank you in advance for any reviews I may receive!