Equation For Wordsmiths

Equation For Wordsmiths

A Poem by DriDri

I'm no statistician. 
Math is by no means my area of expertise, I couldn't draw 
you a graph, charting my adoration along the x-y axis. 
I could not write up quadratic equations or, a mathematical proof of my love for you. 
   I'll write in verse of it instead. 
   My forté, I'll steal from Shakespeare and compare you to 
   a summers day. I'l scribble my answers, 
   in elevated diction, rather than numbers. 
  Invent new metaphors, to best describe why my heart yearns for you, 
so many miles, 

Away.  

© 2013 DriDri


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Very nice. I like how this is a love poem, but that's not immediately apparent at first, and you've managed to make this very fresh and new as opposed to how depressingly dependent and clingy a great deal of love poems can get. I also like the line break you chose to insert between the last two lines - I think that highlights the meaning in them and raises the stakes a great deal. Very well done, you should be proud.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Beautifully written, clever, and creative. Well penned!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your diction is off the charts. This is far different from the usual love poem. I love the fact that it's concise and says so much. A genius write indeed!

Chaos_Collector

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool it in it nicely did

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice. I like how this is a love poem, but that's not immediately apparent at first, and you've managed to make this very fresh and new as opposed to how depressingly dependent and clingy a great deal of love poems can get. I also like the line break you chose to insert between the last two lines - I think that highlights the meaning in them and raises the stakes a great deal. Very well done, you should be proud.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the creativity is great
love the title
thank you for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


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oh s very creative...i adore this!

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Added on February 14, 2013
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