Second Date

Second Date

A Poem by Poetic Injustice

Our first date went well

Extremely so, one might say

No poker faces, dual tell

And so our second is today

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One may ask the importance

The first or the second takes

I'd venture this opinion by chance

*Getting* the second one is important, logic dictates

© 2009 Poetic Injustice


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Really like this. I am just looking for a first and hoping to get a second. Thanks A very good piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple and short yet very honest and almost appealing to one's senses.

Loved it.

Nae-Nae ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Second one is much more exciting methinks. But we have'nt had out first one PI......LOL

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True. The second one is really the determining one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very cute piece. I liked it. I hope your second date goes well.. You are a great person. This is a great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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