Amor in text

Amor in text

A Poem by Poetic Injustice
"

Texts shared ... thoughts and feelings ... desires ... dreams ... hopes ...

"

"I want to explore you and discover us.

I want to immerse myself in you, inside and out.

I want to blend, not knowing where either begins or ends."

~~~~

"I am just me and I don't have to be anything but who I am with you.

I adore you wholly.

Make love to me. Not just once, not just one night but one lifetime at a time."

~~~~

"I've been making love to you one minute into our first meeting.

Every second, awake or asleep. And will forever more."

~~~~

"You have my heart racing"

~~~~

"The race is won. We win."

© 2009 Poetic Injustice


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Wow.. I loved the feel and flow of this one.. and it's from a monumental point of view.. with really high hopes and dreams for love.. the line:

"Make love to me. Not just once, not just one night but one lifetime at a time." that portion of it shows you possibly believe in reincarnation.. and believe in love so deep that it can last more than a lifetime.. what a deep lover this comes from inside! I

Amazing that many say they would bore of this type of love.. however if the right one.. I think maybe you just never get bored.. sometimes happy and sometimes really upset.. but not bored.. lol! Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

I adore this. The feeling is beautiful and speaks of an integration of souls. Very deep and very moving...Beautiful...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well Capt'n P.......the mind completely and utterly boggles. You point out clearly how the power of texting can affect one's entire life by getting in to one's head, mind spirit and soul. But the boggling bit is.......ehmmmm..who is this lucky gal ??
Thanks for sharing deary
Babsie BEE XXX

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. I loved the feel and flow of this one.. and it's from a monumental point of view.. with really high hopes and dreams for love.. the line:

"Make love to me. Not just once, not just one night but one lifetime at a time." that portion of it shows you possibly believe in reincarnation.. and believe in love so deep that it can last more than a lifetime.. what a deep lover this comes from inside! I

Amazing that many say they would bore of this type of love.. however if the right one.. I think maybe you just never get bored.. sometimes happy and sometimes really upset.. but not bored.. lol! Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

512 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on December 5, 2009
Last Updated on December 5, 2009

Author

Poetic Injustice
Poetic Injustice

TX



About
Lyrics | King Harvest lyrics - Dancing In The Moonlight lyrics EvictedA Poem by Dani California Funny | Forward this Picture A MomentA Poem by Dani California Funny | Forward this Picture .. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Demented Demented

A Poem by Jason