Eden

Eden

A Poem by DAH
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Metaphysical

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At this moment

my feelings,

inside and out,

interchangeable

 

About earth:

to say, it is crumbling

to say, it is broken

 

Once, there was earth

as two syllables: Eden

 

On our knees / begging /

we should be begging

for redemption,

 

/ but / to whom do we beg?


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from my 9th book of poetry: SPHERICAL

(Argotist Press)


©dah / dahlusion / argotist 2019


first published in BlogNostics Journal



SPHERICAL is a FREE ebook download


visit: dahlusion.wordpress.com

 

© 2019 DAH


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I am no longer sure who we should be begging forgiveness from. I am more likely to apologise and beg forgiveness of the younger generations who have to live with the mess we have made. But I do remember that garden of Eden I once admired. A thought provoking write DAH.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


DAH

1 Year Ago

Chris, I have a gut feeling that there is nobody for us to ask forgiveness of for what we've done to.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much DAH for the link and the opportunity to read such first class poetry as comes from.. read more
DAH

1 Year Ago

Thank you, and take SPHERICAL in slowly, one metafizzie at a time.

Also my fifth book.. read more
Love the questions this evokes as the writer expressess ambivallance about existence and origin and god. Thankfully there is no god of whom to ask redemption!

Posted 1 Year Ago


DAH

1 Year Ago

I'm honored, John, by this critique. Happy to read that it works for you.

This piece .. read more

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