My Flower Girl

My Flower Girl

A Poem by Dai Edenburough

One day, the flower girl came to me,

bringing with her a single flower.

And telling me that I am her one and only.

As I took the gracious flower, it began to rain.

Filling the air with many beautiful sents.

I closed my eyes, inhaled deeply and opened them slowly.

Only to see that my flower girl was no longer there.

Yet the flower remained in my hands. I closed my eyes

once again and shed a single tear. Only to wake and

realize that i was dreaming of my far away dear.

© 2013 Dai Edenburough


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I really like this, so sweet and wonderful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is really sweet and sad too. i enjoyed this poem. Keep up the work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one is nice.. :) well i like the way you write story in the form of poetry...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice poem Dylan. :) Have I read this before? It sounds very familiar.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like the emotion! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2011
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Tags: My, Flower, Girl, Love