Maybe Life is Real

Maybe Life is Real

A Poem by Murisaka
"

South Bound Saurez

"
She looked so fine,
With the way she walked
And the way she talked
Her every aspect
Made my heart jump and start

It only missed a couple of beats babe
So don't worry about a thing

When it gets back on track
And jumps on the rhythm
It feels just fine

Just like you do babe
Just like you do

Its a shake and a twist
And I'm ready to twist and shout
But the way you make me feel
Well i cant explain what that feeling is about

Maybe life is real
And enjoyable too

When you stroll
Well you do it so fine
My hearts gone with you
But i have just one question this time;

Did you end up taking
 My mind?


I cant feel a thing
Other than what I'm doing with you
And when I'm without you
I feel lost in the breeze

Like the one left flowing
Beneath my knees

I'm feeling fine
I'm feeling good
I'm feeling like my feet
are back on the ground

Just one more question this time around;
Are you feeling like your back here as well?

© 2011 Murisaka


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This isn't really sexy (sorry Ange :) I think that it's more along the lines of playful.
I like how confident this piece is, but I'm not fond of the repetitiveness.
But it's a good piece :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is really great! super sexy and awesome blues feel!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Murisaka
Murisaka

Chiloquin, OR



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I'm William, 18, yeah (sarcasm) I like writing poetry, and I tend to look at my life, feelings, and the music I listen to for inspiration. If you haven't already found out from reading my poems I tend.. more..

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A Poem by Murisaka