Stuck in Addiction (Poem)

The tears fall

With the rain drops

Can't find a way

To make the pain stop

Can't seem to let things go

No guardian angel

Go through it worse

Where'd my mind go

Sure I still learn s**t

But no matter the struggle

I still yearn s**t

Go through a ball, a bag, a bottle

Still burn s**t

Thinking the escape is better

Then finding solutions

Reviews

[PP]

You've summed up the trauma of any addiction so precisely in 4 short paragraphs.. It is a work of a lifetime.

So apt when you say:

"Thinking the escape is better
Then finding solutions"

Wise:)

[Damien Davison]

Why thank you, that means a lot, really. One of my first posts on this site, didn't even think it would get reviewed lol. Thanks again!

[PP]

You're welcome! Guess this is one of your best..

[Damien Davison]

To you, it seems, lol. I suppose each poem touches each person differently, I don't think I have a "best" :) Thank you though, I really appreciate it!

[PP]

in total agreement with you on this point, very true:) I guess the interpretation of this appeals to me on a different level so I tagged it as your best my dear humble poet!!! lol

[Damien Davison]

Again, I do appreciate it, take care!