Tears of Time (Poem)

Tears of Time (Poem)

A Poem by Damien Davison
"

Life to oblivion, edge to rock bottom...

"
A dark splash
Focus flooding
Lost the time
When is it coming
Life to oblivion
Edge to rock bottom
Mind to it lost
Lucky to 'caught him'
Unfamiliar face
A familiar smile
Eyes to my soul
Our hearts' on trial
Acceptance, please
Forgive my design
Worn and rusted
From tears of time

© 2012 Damien Davison


Author's Note

Damien Davison
In the "Lucky to 'caught him'" part, I was selling drugs and I was lucky to have not been caught.

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very deep writing love the forgive my design line that just did it for me really this was great

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

I appreciate it, truly, all the reviews, I'll be returning the favor to all in due time. Thanks agai.. read more
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PP
I can feel through your words. Even if you weren't caught, but guess you were caught with multiple emotions, heart breaks, distrust, so on and so forth of many faces that you knew yet so strange!

I love the honesty you have in your writings Damien:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

That stanza was more of "this is how it will go next time", I know I didn't make it very clear haha... read more
PP

7 Years Ago

wow, its different from how I might have interpreted the entire poem!
Damien,

And interesting and introspective poem. Short poetic lines are a harsh master. You did well with them.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I do practice them an awful lot heh. I find the longer ones I catch myself putt.. read more
Wonderfully done as always. I love getting to read your work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoy my writing, I appreciate all the reads and reviews!
Bound In Red

7 Years Ago

Your welcome.
I've found this easy to connect with reincarnation. Two halves of a soul; always finding their way to another, but cursed unable to be together. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

Heh, sounds like my relationship with my bay's mother. Thanks for reviewing... I find myself fantasi.. read more
Tai Ryens

7 Years Ago

I often find myself fantasizing in general. Whether it be about past lives, future ones, memories, .. read more
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Mia
Your writing never seems like you were writing for the sake of writing.
"Acceptance, please
Forgive my design
Worn and rusted
From tears of time"
WOW!



Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

I appreciate the review. Whenever I find the motivation or that inspiration you get I just go with i.. read more
stay strong, to every dark tunnel there's a light! but this poem is so powerful and personal - great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

It was pretty much written for my new girlfriend, the last stanza particularly. thank you for readin.. read more
I like your way with words.. it feels sharp and direct so I can take in the powerful end of emotion behind the point... Love it..x That last stanza is killer..xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

Why thank you, I try to make most of my work an experience... Some lack but hey... Thank you again!
I really like this poem, great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Damien Davison

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
K-mo

7 Years Ago

your welcome!

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Added on September 19, 2012
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